The second day of planning

Today I improved my final idea by adding some more information on it. When people pick up leaflets they usually want to know where the shop is and if they have any special offers. So I added the address of the Shakin Moo's and special offer to attract people's attention. Here is a picture of it before:

Here it is after:

We each have now done a final idea, here is James's final idea:

I think that his idea is very good because it attracts attention and makes you want to buy the hot shake. Here is Michael's final idea:

I think the idea is good but it could be better. After that we made a questionnaire, unfortunately we failed on our first attempt because we released that it was hard to fill out and was very basic. We redid it by making the questionnaire tally type. After that we asked 11 people to fill it in. Here it is:

By looking at the questionnaire I realised that everybody likes the James's idea more than mine or Michael's. This means that in the next lessons we are going to start to do his idea on the computer, it is going to be hard to replicate the idea because the idea is drawn by hand.